Youth
I see your pictures
and smile.
I know
the color will begin
to bleed away silently.
Your unfettered laughter
will be tossed into
a corner
of the closet of your mind,
while you try on
a new wardrobe
of straitjacket suits -
the ambitious black
and the responsible grey.
Your smooth face
will be lined by the
pathways of your choices,
and your straight back
will stoop to conquer
life's battles.
Yet, I will not tell you all.
I will admire
the pretty pictures you take,
and steal a little hue
to tint my own sepia prints.
and smile.
I know
the color will begin
to bleed away silently.
Your unfettered laughter
will be tossed into
a corner
of the closet of your mind,
while you try on
a new wardrobe
of straitjacket suits -
the ambitious black
and the responsible grey.
Your smooth face
will be lined by the
pathways of your choices,
and your straight back
will stoop to conquer
life's battles.
Yet, I will not tell you all.
I will admire
the pretty pictures you take,
and steal a little hue
to tint my own sepia prints.
9 Comments:
Woah! ano, real nice!!!!
so you wont tell everything?
hiding the smile. eh?
holy crap...awesome!!!
always wonder why dark stuff feels so much better... :-P
Superb!!! Simply awesome...and ruthless!!
loved it!!
beautifull ano ... agonisingly familiar and numbing too .. in a way !
Great stuff!
kickass,ano!
Aside,I wonder whether the effect wouldn't be the same if you were to write this down as a few short paragraphs, without those carriage-returns...:)
beautiful ano... absolutely beautiful!
the color will begin
to bleed away silently
Such breathtaking imagery. ^_^
My first time on your blog. Do write more. I have relished reading your poetry (especially the poem entitled "I'm Not Here Anymore").
Dream well... ^_^
This is striking and powerful - I love the mystery within the lines, and the sonics are beautifil. Very nice!
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