Deluge
Trembling leaves eavesdrop
on our tearful conversations
as the rain washes away our words,
swirling down the drain.
We seek shelter
in the archways of our friendship,
Holding hands and never minding
the eternal drip
that erodes and corrodes.
We never even say good-bye
in the sweeping deluge
that carries us where we go.
on our tearful conversations
as the rain washes away our words,
swirling down the drain.
We seek shelter
in the archways of our friendship,
Holding hands and never minding
the eternal drip
that erodes and corrodes.
We never even say good-bye
in the sweeping deluge
that carries us where we go.
8 Comments:
ano
"We seek shelter
In the archways of friendship"
i've been there...beautiful imagery
Beautiful imagery indeed. Loved the "eternal drip that erodes and corrodes".
Priya.
thanks jiva, priya.
hey beautiful one Ano:-)...like Priya said very beautiful imagery indeed.
thanks scarlett!
ano,
I'm waiting for one poem of yours where i could give critical feedback! you're so darn good it's seems like a distant possibility.
such a simple and yet lucid poem. agree with priya et al.
keep writing,
asuph.
aw c'mon asuph - u must be kidding!
thanks a ton for the appreciation.
We seek shelter
in the archways of our friendship,
What a beautiful image...
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